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So You're Going to Make a Speech
by Patricia Fripp, CSP, CPAE
Congratulations! You've been chosen (or drafted) to deliver a speech. Don't panic -- Fripp
is here!
What Do I Talk About?
Start by asking yourself three
questions:
1. Who is my audience? (What
do I know about the corporate culture or collective personality of the
group?)
2. What do they want or need
to know from me?
3. How long can or should
I talk?
Where Do I Get Material?
If you're going to be addressing
a particular group a few weeks from now, keep a small notebook handy to
jot down ideas and situations related to your topic and audience. Make
a list of what you know that can benefit your them, all the experiences
and situations that could serve as good (or bad) examples for others,
high points and low points, failures and successes.
Keep adding those sudden and
stunning bits of insight that come to you in the shower or car. Or maybe
you said something on the subject to a friend that was particularly funny
or memorable. Some of these experiences may become the original stories
you use to illustrate a key point in your speech. When you actually sit
down to write, you'll have plenty of material.
How Do I Outline
My Talk?
There are two basic outlines
that work well for both beginning and advanced speakers alike.
1. The Past-Present Journey
Formula
Tell your audience a three-part
story:
This is where I was.
This is where I am.
This is how I got here.
It's a simple format that helps you tell the audience who you are and why
you are qualified to speak on the topic you've chosen.
Here's an example of how effective
the outline can be. A successful Realtor was asked to deliver a 25-minute
presentation for the local Board of Realtors. I coached her to open like
this: "Twelve years ago, before I went into the real estate business,
I had never sold anything but Girl Scout cookies, and I hadn't done that
well. Last year, I sold $13 million in a slow market, selling homes that
averaged $100,000 each. Today, I'll tell you how I built my business."
Right away, the audience knew exactly what she was going to talk about,
and they were eager to hear her story!
2. The Q&A Outline
The members of your audience
probably want to know the answers to the same kinds of business questions
you're asked at parties or professional functions. You can start with,
"The five questions I'm most frequently asked about investments (or whatever
your product or service is) are--"
Pose the first question to
the audience and answer it for them in a conversational manner, just as
you would with a potential customer or at a party. Even though you've
never made a speech before, you've certainly had a lot of experience answering
questions in your field.
How Do I Start to
Write My Speech?
That's easy. To begin with,
don't. Gather and organize your ideas, plan and polish, but don't write
it down word for word. For now, just jot an outline with key points and
ideas on a note pad.
The Speech Itself
1. Open with a bang.
The first and last thirty
seconds of your speech have the most impact, so give them extra thought,
time, and effort. If you haven't hooked your audience's interest, their
minds are going to wander off. Whatever you do, don't waste any of your
precious seconds with "Ladies and Gentlemen, it is a pleasure to be here
tonight." Open with an intriguing or startling statement: "Half the people
in this room are going to," "As a young man, my father gave me this valuable
advice...," "Of all the questions I am most frequently asked..."
I helped a neighbor, Mike
Powell, with a speech he was putting together for the Continental Breakfast
Club in San Francisco. Mike was a senior scientist with Genentech at the
time. I suggested that since most of us don't know what scientists are
like or what they do, he should tell the audience. Mike captured everyone's
attention by saying, "Being a scientist is like doing a jigsaw puzzle
in a snowstorm at night...you don't have all the pieces...and you don't
have the picture you are trying to create."
2. Develop strong supporting
stories.
If you're using the Past-Present
outline format, the middle of your talk is where you expand on your key
points and develop personal stories that support where you were and where
you are now. In the Q&A format, develop one or two strong anecdotes to
support each answer. Personal anecdotes are best, but you can also insert
some of the ideas and examples you've been gathering in your journal or
computer.
3. Close on a high note.
Your close should be the high
point of your speech. First, summarize the key elements of the investment
process (or whatever your topic is). If you're planning to take questions
from the audience, say, "Before my closing remarks, are there any questions."
Answer them then.
The last thirty seconds of
your speech must send people out energized and fulfilled. Finish your
talk with something inspirational that supports your theme. My scientist
friend Mike talked of the frustrations of being a scientist. He closed
by saying, "People often ask, Why should anyone want to be a scientist?"
Then Mike told them about a particularly information-intensive medical
conference he had attended. The final speaker rose and said, "I am a thirty-two-year-old
wife and mother of two. I have AIDS. Please work fast."
Mike got a standing ovation
for his speech. He was telling his audience what they needed to know.
How Do I Polish
My Speech?
Your next step is to make
a written draft of your speech. You can assemble your notes, or you may
prefer to talk your ideas into a tape recorder and transcribe the words.
Then read your draft to confirm that it is:
- Interesting: After every
point you make, ask yourself, "Who cares?" If no one does, edit it out.
- Concise: Delete redundancies
and clichés.
- Effective: Are your supporting
examples strong and on target? If not, replace them.
- Personal: Does it have a
high I-You Factor? Be sure you've connected yourself with your audience
by putting them into your speech.
- Politically correct: "PC"
is sometimes overdone, but it is essential. You lose listeners if you
unintentionally offend them.
Vigorous polishing makes your
talk tighter, more powerful, and less likely to bore or irritate your
audience.
How Do I Rehearse?
You've edited and fine-tuned
a written version of your talk. Now you're going to practice it. (You
may think this is too much trouble, but you'll be glad you did.)
1. Tape your self reading
your talk out loud to check on timing and emphasis.
2. Prepare outline notes.
Even though you've just gone to a great deal of trouble to prepare a written
speech, you're NOT going to read it! Nothing puts an audience to sleep
faster. Instead, you're going to speak directly and spontaneously to the
audience, maintaining essential eye contact. The secret is to prepare
easy-to-read notes. Write your key points on a pad or card that you'll
keep on the lectern or table. Use a bold felt-tip pen or a large typeface
on your printer. As you speak, you'll follow your road map with quick
glances. An easy-to-read wristwatch or small clock on the lectern lets
you keep track of the time so you can speed up or slow down, cut or add
material, so you finish on time.
3. Tape your "impromptu" talk.
Again, check for timing. As you play it back, notice repetitive phrases
and non-words like "er" and "ah." Try again, minus these distracting irritants,
until you are speaking smoothly and confidently.
4. Practice in front of an
audience. Ask one or two perceptive people for their feedback. Make it
clear that you want constructive criticism, not just praise. Did they
understand the points you were making? Was there a lack of logic or continuity?
Did they think you spoke too quickly or slowly? Use their feedback to
polish your presentation.
5. Write your own introduction,
and bring a printed copy! Even if you're speaking for free, you want the
emcee to pronounce your name right, mention your company's name, and tell
people how to get in touch with you.
The Big Day
If you're speaking from a
stage, explain to the introducer that you'll come on stage from the wings
before they leave the lectern after introducing you. They need to get
off the stage before the audience stops applauding. This way, the audience
looks at you instead of the emcee.
You've taken center stage
-- now take it away!
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Patricia Fripp, CSP, CPAE is a San Francisco-based executive
speech coach, sales trainer,
and professional speaker
on Change, Customer Service, Promoting Business, and Communication Skills.
She is the author of Get What You Want!, Make
It, So You Don't Have to Fake It!, and Past-President of the National
Speakers Association. Meetings and Conventions Magazine named Fripp "one
of the country's most electrifying speakers!" PFripp@Fripp.com,
(800) 634-3035, http://www.fripp.com
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